It took a while to arrive at this gag, but I like it a lot—it's brainy and smart-alecky at the same time. It does require a bit of work on the reader's part, and I have a feeling most people will just be baffled and move on to "Classic Peanuts."
Here's what I submitted to Mister P. This barely qualifies as a sketch, but once again Dan worked his artistic magic to bring it to life.
Late last year, I submitted an earlier version of the joke:
Dan decided not to use this one, although he did tell me it made him laugh. Apparently, cartoons that mention dyslexia in any way get certain people riled up, and they start sending angry letters and emails.
After being rejected, I didn't want to give up on this one. The idea of an organized group based on non-belief is inherently funny, even if it is a simplification. I kept playing around with it and eventually came up with the anagram angle, so it all worked out (by which I mean I got another joke published).
I think the original idea is still pretty funny, but in comparison it seems rather lazy and obvious—not much more than a pun or a t-shirt line. The final version is richer and more surprising, with a layer of humor that wasn't there in the dyslexia gag.
If you missed our earlier collaborations, you can find them all on Dan's blog.
Stay tuned for more in the near future, including a good old non-intellectual poop joke!
As always, your comments are welcomed.
It's pretty good. You'd have to be an idiot to miss it. Or a religionist. Oops. Same thing.
ReplyDeleteInteresting what these kinds of constraints can drive in the final product. I like the final one better too! (Readers generally could use a little more work, no?)
ReplyDeleteWhen I think anagrams, I can imagine atheists being into anagrams.
ReplyDeleteI get a sense that the anonymous post above is intended to make some clever point. If so, it's very obtuse.
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